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Review in Cozies Capers and Crimes PILIKIA IS MY BUSINESS
Val Lyon is a newbie private eye in glamorous Honolulu. When she's approached by Brian Magruder to help him protect Events begin to unfold with alarming speed. Jean is almost I really like Val Lyon, and this book is a very good combination |
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Review in BookPage REVIEW BY DAVID G. LAGRAFF Pilikia is a Hawaiian word, and it means trouble. Yes, you're going to Hawaii in this one, but you can forgetabout the Hawaii you're familiar with, the one with the free Mai-Tai's included in the 8-day, 7-night touristpackage. Instead, you're going into the real Hawaii, from the high society to the devious and violent underworld.And you're going in hard and fast, with a gun in your purse. Did I say purse? A good mystery needs a good P.I., and this one has Val Lyon, a tough private eye whohappens to be a woman. She served time on a big city police force, got her tail caught in a high profile crackand did hard time. It's a tricky thing to strike just the right balance between hard and soft with a femaleprotagonist, but author Mark Troy walks this delicate tightrope expertly. He manages to come up with a realand believable female private eye that everyone will enjoy prowling the streets with (think Janet EvanovichísStephanie Plum). Pilikia Is My Business kicks off with P.I. Val Lyon answering the call to work for Brian Magruder, a wealthylawyer who needs someone to protect Jean Pfeiffer, a honey-blonde high society mother involved in an uglychild custody battle. Jean and ex-hubby Jock Pfeiffer are fighting over who gets Nathan, the pimply13-year-old prize of their now-finished bad marriage. The no-good father is a thick-necked bull with a badattitude, too much money, influence and testosterone, and a history of violent abuse. As a pre-emptive strike,Jean has tucked the kid safely away, somewhere not even she knows about. Only her friends know for sure,and Jock begins working through her list of friends to find the kid. But Daddy Jock's idea of working throughMommy's friends involves killing them, and Val is hired to find the kid before daddy does. The plot is classic stuff, as labyrinthine and convoluted as the branches of a Banyan tree, and one you'llpleasantly agonize over trying to figure out. Just don't get too comfortable with your assumptions, which willconstantly be proved wrong. And don't get too comfy with the other people in the story, who have a tendency towind up dead, just when you least expect them to. Val Lyon is an interesting female character, one for whom the lines of self-identity and social definition areblurred. She is an enigma, but one with promise, and I hope to follow her further down those dark Honolulustreets as she wanders through the wreckage of other people's lives in search of herself. Pilikia Is My Business is a good, strong debut by a talented author. Add this download to the shopping cart,punch in your plastic number, curl up in front of your screen with a single malt scotch and enjoy. David LaGraff is the author of five envelope-pushing romantic suspense novels currently appearing at Wordbeams.com.Like the book? Agree? Disagree? Email LaGraff at dlagraff@concentric.net. |
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Review in Mystery News Pilikia Is My Business by Mark Troy This is my first foray into reviewing product obtained from the emerging world of alternative publishing, but I doubt it will be my last. For one thing, the growing proliferation of small genre presses - be they vanity/self published, Print-On-Demand, e-books, or traditional print run houses - suggests they ain't gonna fold up their tents and slink off softly into the good night. For another thing, genre fiction published by a small press doesn't necessarily equate to inferior writing and storytelling. The mental image I call forth is analogous to a scene in Jurassic Park III - sometimes you just gotta stick your hand into a pile of dinosaur dung in order to find a working cell phone. Pilikia..., the first full-length novel featuring distaff Hawaiian private eye Val Lyon, is a case in point - it's a highly-polished working cell phone. The novel was first published as an e-book earlier this year, and has now been issued in a trade paperback format. Does that mean this is a paperback reprint? Damned if I know. Some of you might already know that Val Lyon was introduced to mystery fans through half a dozen short stories published in various locations (Murderous Intent, Mystery Buff, Plots With Guns, Nefarious, Futures) beginning in 1998. She'll also show up in a forthcoming hard-boiled anthology from Wildside Press. Val is a nicely-developed character (and I don't say that in a sleazy manner), a former member of the SFPD who played professional basketball in Italy, and now works for a private agency in Honolulu. Pilikia (pronounced pee-LEE-kee-uh per the author; the accent is my own assumption) presents Val with a complicated case that involves child abuse, resurrection of a gay and/or feminist rights underground, the Catholic church, Hawaiian real estate, and murder. Mark Troy is an accomplished wordsmith, does an exceptional job writing in a female voice, and providing a powerful sense of place. Val's investigative techniques are logical and well-thought for the most part. The author exhibits a solid grounding in the private eye sub-genre, and though character language is quite salty, the violence level is low and for the most part, off-stage. If Pilikia was a movie, I'd assign a PG rating (despite the eff words). Interested readers should know more about Pilikia's distribution and packaging if they want to find a copy. LTD Books is a small publishing house specializing in electronic and Print-On-Demand formats. For those who frequent electronic venues, LTD Books has won a few IPPY and EPPIE awards for their work in that field. According to the publisher's web site, www.ltdbooks.com, there are two ways to purchase Pilikia - order directly from them, or order on-line using a search engine through Amazon.com or maybe Barnes and Noble (the author receives a larger profit percentage if you order direct). I recently accessed the site and couldn't find a link to Mark's book, but the HTML format was bouncing all over the place and my search may have fallen victim to hit and miss clicking. Amazon might be the quickest method of access. From a packaging point of view, LTD produces a fairly nice, well-bound trade paperback that doesn't crack or separate during reading. A minor point is that the book bears no cover price, and the only reference to private eye fiction (or mystery, or even novel) is given on the back cover blurb. Clearly, you have to know exactly what you want in order to obtain a copy of the novel. But those caveats aside, Pilikia provides evidence that a strong new voice has been added to the private eye sub-genre, and is well worth exercising your own investigative abilities to locate. Despite vagaries of small press distribution, I plan to follow the adventures of Val Lyon now that I've gotten to know her. Reviewed by: Reed Andrus Rating: 3 quills |
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Review in Wicked Company Message: 21 She pumps iron, punches out bullies, and performs table dances
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Review on Amazon.com An Excellent P.I. Novel, September 6, 2001 |
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Review in Word Weaving A book review by Cindy Penn Pilikia is My Business by Mark Troy LTDBooks Absolutely intriguing -- Very highly recommended Val Lyon makes trouble her business. With a background as an ex-cop, ex-con, and ex-pro basketball player this private investigator boldly faces down anyone who blocks her chosen path. Lawyer Brian Magruder hires Val to protect his client. A lot of people have taken sides on one of his cases and passions run high. Brian's representing Jean Pfeifer, who is locked in a bitter war over custody of her son Nathan. Her ex-husband is accused of abusing the boy. Because she sent her child into hiding, the mother now faces contempt of court charges. When a rally to support Jean's cause erupts into violence, Val quickly learns that more than a simple child custody case is at stake. Jean's thirteen-year old son Nathan protects a secret that positions the Magruders, a wealthy local family with powerful connections, against an unyielding group of feminine activists determined to keep the child hidden. During the course of her investigation, Val becomes emotionally involved with Brian, who is also a member of the powerful family. In addition, Nathan's testosterone laden, abusive father likewise has had unfortunate dealings with the Magruder family. As danger builds around this fiery triangle, leaving behind a trail of bodies, Val finds herself pitted against politics, power, and murder. Author Mark Troy's hard boiler mystery PILIKIA IS MY BUSINESS will thoroughly satisfy even the most demanding readers. The authentic feel for Hawaii, as the background for this mystery thriller, is only the intriguing beginning. The first person narrative offers a compelling mix of vulgarity and sensitivity, outlandish characterizations and off the cuff humor. Further, Troy strikes a surprising balance between brashness and femininity with this tough talking, enigmatic heroine. In addition, this classically convoluted plot presents surprising twists and turns, with characters dropping dead and teasing details that keep the pages turning. Very highly recommended. |
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Review in Sharpwriter Pilikia Is My Business by Mark Troy Reviewed by Grabbermcgrew
Rating System Reviewer Rating: * * * * * "Pilika Is My Business" is an excellent excellent
book! I'm pretty stingy When I am reading a book for review, I just start reading.
I don't pay 'Pilika Is My Business' is set in Hawaii and 'pilika' means
trouble. This The detective, Ms. Lyons, is recruited by a son/brother from
a wealthy This novel gets involved quickly and is pretty high action.
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Review on Dorothyl Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2001 09:18:23 -0500 Ah, to be twenty something and a former pro US basketball
player (in sigh. <G> This is the concept behind "Pilikia is my Business" by Mark Troy. Now, if that intro doesn't have you running to the bookstore, that is my fault. I really, really, liked this book. Not only for the background
of Hawaii Thomas Magnum where are you? double sigh. Of course, this book is really, actually, better than any
of the "Magnum Read it. Now. You'll regret it if you don't. Why? Because you'll never know what "H. I. T." means if you don't read it.*
* for those who can't get to the book that means "Hunks
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Review in Romance Reviews Today PILIKIA IS MY BUSINESS - Mark Troy LTD Books www.ltdbooks.com ISBN: 1-55316-033-9 April 2001 Mystery Present Day - Honolulu, Hawaii For thirteen months, former San Francisco Police Detective
Val Lyon spent PILIKIA IS MY BUSINESS is a must read for fans of Janet Evanovich's I do feel I should warn certain readers from the book. The
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Review in Sime~Gen Pilikia Is My Business Former cop, Val Lyon, now a private investigator, is hired
by an It's not only the writing skill of the author but how he lays
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Review in Scribes World Four and a half stars Val Lyon is not your everyday private investigator. For one thing, she lives in Hawaii-and this book will give you an insider's view of what life in Hawaii is really like, and not just deep blue oceans, sandy beaches, and bikinis. For another, she doesn't always live by the rules that other people make. If the cause is great enough-and in this case, it is-she doesn't hesitate to do her own breaking-and-entering, or borrow her client's car, or get totally wiped out on her favorite alcoholic beverage-in a convent, no less. At the center of this case is Nathan Pfeifer, an adolescent whose mother refuses to give him up to the father suspected of abusing him. But Nathan's mother's friends are many and resourceful, and they have hidden Nathan from everyone (including his mother) until they deem it safe for him to return. The Macgruders, however, have power-and connections to Nathan's family. Brian Macgruder is the teddy-bear-like attorney who hires Val; Ken is a hotshot real estate developer, and Frank is on the fast track to the Holy See. Somewhere, there's a connection-and Val must find it before the killers find Nathan. Whether she does or not, the cost turns out to be higher than Val wants to pay. The plot keeps the action moving, but the author has done
his research well and the characters are realistic. It's easy
to identify with Val-and it's rare for a male author to write
a well-done female character-and the writing flows off the page.
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Review in Reviewing The Evidence PILIKIA IS MY BUSINESS Move over, Irene Kelly, Kay Scarpetta, and Kinsey Millhone; there1s a new gal in town, and she1s taking numbers and turning up the heat on the bad guys. Mark Troy gives us Val Lyon, Hawaii P.I., and she more than fills the void left in America1s tropical paradise after the departure of Magnum. Val carries the baggage required of a tough private eye: she1s an ex-San Francisco homicide detective who was framed for murder and spent ten years in the slammer for it. She also spent several years in Europe as a professional basketball player. Needless to say, these experiences give her something of an attitude, which she takes with her to Hawaii to work for Leo Laskowitz, colorful owner of a local detective agency. He puts her onto a client, attorney Paul McGruder, who wants her to help him with a nasty child custody case. McGruder represents the mother, who has been jailed on contempt charges for failing to produce her son for his court-assigned visit with the father. Troy writes him as a classic testosterone-driven jerk who the mother believes has abused their son. The boy has been hidden away by a group of women1s rights activists in a location not even known to the mother, who1s afraid she might be forced to divulge it if she knew where it was. Attorney McGruder wants Val to find him to be sure he1s safe and in good hands. Val soon finds all is not as it seems. Dead ends and roadblocks tell her something more sinister is going on. Troy creates a complex knot: the possibility of the father running a child pornography ring, shady property development deals in the hands of McGruder1s powerful family, and some stubborn feminists with their own agenda. As Val begins to unravel the knot, she enters into a lustful affair with McGruder while trying to keep someone from killing them. She handles both of these tasks with just the right mixture of aplomb and frailty so that the reader can easily root for her. Troy provides a sufficient number of deftly drawn red herrings to keep us turning the pages, and he adroitly hides the true identity of the evil person lurking at the center of it all until the very end, providing a nice twist. Val1s penchant for the cynical wisecrack brings to mind the prototypeÐPhilip Marlowe. Is it coincidence that Troy1s title, Pilikia is My Business, translates, as 3Trouble2 is My Business? This puts Troy in the company of Robert Crais, Elizabeth Cosin, and Barbara Seranella, all of whom have been able to bring Chandler1s style into the new millennium, adapting it enough to avoid being derivative. This review would not be complete without a brief foray into the minefield of gender. All of the tough and resourceful female protagonists mentioned above are written by female authorsÐJan Burke, Patricia Cornwell, and Sue Grafton, respectfully. Of course men have been writing women, and women, men in the general field of literature for a long time. But the mystery-crime genre has remained for the most part 3gender matched.2 Mark Troy has been brave enough to cross these boundaries, and he1s a good enough writer to pull it off with complete believability. Reviewed by George M. Scott, February 2002 |